I spent last week at Fort Mason with my lovely writing,
teaching, dog walking partner Ann Jacobus-Kordahl, mentoring twelve gifted writers.
We talked about developing characters—how they need to want
something that’s hard to get—a desire with obstacles to struggle against. The
twelve listened and thought and started to write.
We talked about struggle and conflict, tension and odds. You
could see the ideas taking shape. They asked questions, thought some more and
then wrote and wrote.
We talked about showing not telling—how dialogue and using
the five senses help us to show. They got it and used it.
In the course of a week of afternoons, they created twelve
amazing short stories. Two different and unique stories about lost mothers and
daughters needing to find them. A story
of self-discovery and traveling the world, port to port. A story of an old man
afraid to follow his dream until the right person gives him hope. A story about a courageous thief who nearly
gets away with the most valuable painting in the world. A story about a girl
helping her family escape from Nazi occupied Norway. Another with an evil Martian
despot who goes to war for a donut recipe. Another in a graveyard with the
spirit of a dead author with the power to enter books who takes over the minds
of three children. A story of a girl determined to help her softball team win
the trophy. And another of a girl who must chose between her love of swimming
and her politically radical parents. A story about a bullied girl who must
summon the courage to fight for her beloved tree. And a story of four friends
vacationing in London who band together to solve a murder mystery.
Really, really good stuff. Most of the writers were twelve
years old. Two were eleven. One was thirteen. Their stories all had active characters with a strong desire or need, obstacles in their way, tension and conflict, sensual details, dialogue, and even endings that were surprising but inevitable. I'd somehow forgotten how smart
kids are. I mean seriously—twelve years is not that long to be on this earth!
How did they get so smart and creative and capable in such a short period of
time?
We also ate a lot of popcorn. And talked about favorite
books and favorite characters. And played some story/word games that made us
all laugh so hard, we cried.
The one thing that was really hard for them was sharing
their stories. Despite our encouragement, only four of the twelve were willing
to read their stories to the group. When we realized that no amount of cajoling
would change their minds, we told them we understood—that sharing is hard and
makes us all feel vulnerable. We wanted to tell them that it gets easier. But
we couldn’t lie.
It doesn’t get easier.
That part at least.
But life keeps getting better and better. Spending the week
with these young writers made even more so.
Take Good Care,
Sharry
What an accurate and deserving tribute to the YWW week and our young colleagues! Thanks, Sharry.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an amazing week! The girls are so lucky to have you and Ann as their mentors and I'm so privileged to have you as my friends!
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