When my girls were little, we
used to play a story game with homemade cards—I would draw pictures on index
cards; an apple tree, a hole in the ground, a cake, a cup and saucer, a girl, a
boy, a witch, a candle, a ruby necklace, a door and so on. You get the gist. We
would shuffle the cards, pick, I think eight or ten, (I can't remember!) spread
them out on the table or in the back seat of the car, and then take turns
making up a story using these items, these nouns, as the elements. Simple verbs
written on some of the cards suggested the action, connecting the nouns to make
things happen. The word 'but' usually worked as the turning point, the problem,
the conflict. The plots, (if any) were very basic, but this is a simplified
version of how I still go about starting a story. My choices, of course, are
more purposeful—I do not draw them from a deck of cards, but rather they come
to me in imagination. Still, they’re made up of nouns and verbs.
Newbery Award winning author, Linda Sue Park, says that
every noun in a story has to do double duty—an item that shows up at any point,
has to show up again, at least once, but preferably several more times. Writing coach Darcy
Pattison calls this narrative patterning. If a blue mug is important
enough to mention once, we better see that blue mug come into play
again and again. It's not the sort of things we notice as readers, but it does
work to stitch a story together, like connecting stars to form a big bear in
the sky. The way the choices we make everyday in our real lives form our own
narratives in big and small ways.
Similarly, random groups of
images can create a narrative. Especially if each image has an element in
common to bind it to the others. Tiny square things. Things with dots. Or
stripes. Things with handles. Things that wind up. Things made out of paper.
Things that are portals. Things that are blue. Or red. Or yellow. Calendar art
is made of such groupings.
On my walks-abouts this week,
I kept my eyes open for the color blue to see how it affected the narrative of
my meandering. It was a random choice, but made me look differently and pay
attention to corners and windows and alleys that wouldn't normally slip into
conscious noticing. It made me look at my neighborhood, my world, in a new way.
I saw things that I pass every day but never saw before. Like the blue truck in a nail salon window. Or the little blue doll in an apartment window in Chinatown. It was fun and opened
my eyes to details in my landscape that I’ve missed. Here is a sampling of my
blue world:
Next week, I'm going to look
for red and then slowly work my way through the rainbow.
Take Good Care,
Sharry
Lovely! Narrative patterning is something I've been thinking about a lot this past week (after reading Darcy's revision book). I've made some fun discoveries!
ReplyDeleteLove your photos - particularly the Scene Drive sign. Made me homesick. xo
Love this! Can't wait to try it.
ReplyDeleteNeed to learn more about this narrative patterning!